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高分范文精彩点评Internet——anIndispensabIeNecessity(1)Whatisthemostsignificantinventioninmoderntimes?Theanswervariesfrompersontoperson．Mobilephone．1aptop．oreveniWatch．Thelistcouldgoonendlessly．(2)However．theabovementionedinventionshaveonethingincommon——theiraccesstotheInternet．Thus．itistheInternetthatisofmajorimportance．(3)TheInternetlinksindividualstogroups．BeforethismillenniumoftheInternet，peoplewerestucktotheverylimitedgeographicalspace，bothphysicallyandspiritually．Nowthissituationhastotallychanged．PeopleCanjoinanyinterestinggroupstheywantandendchtheirsociallife．(4)TheInternetbroadenspeople’Shorizons．Thankstothemajorad．vancesofthenetwork，knowledgeisaccumulatedbymultiplying．Inthiscase，modernpeopleenjoymoresourcesofinformation．thusleadingaqualitylife．(5)TheIntemetshapestheglobalvillage．AstheInternetiSavailableal．mosteverywhere，peoplefromdifferentculturalbackgroundscarlhavemoreconvenientcommunication．Therefore．thedistancebetweendifferentcul—turesanddifferentcountriesshortensamazingly．(6)Inconclusion．IanlfullyconvincedthattheInternetisthemostsignificantinventioninmoderntimes．①开门见山，点明文章讨论的重点——最重要的发明。②用however转折，点明自己的观点——互联网是最重要的发明。③④⑤详细介绍互联网重要的i点原因，层次分明。⑥对文章进行总结。户加分亮点Thelistcouldgoonendlessly．列表可以无限地延续下去。millenniumoftheInternet互联网千年Knowledgeisaccumulatedbymultiplying．知识迅猛增长。leadaqualitylife过上高质量的生活